Mia finally arrived at the bookstore only to discover the poetry
reading was over. Presenters had been scheduled between the hours of 2 and 4
p.m. She glanced at her watch. It was 3:30, but Mia’s car had broken down. It
was too late to call anyone for a ride, so she had decided to walk the three
miles. Better late than never.
Mia set up her display glad the podium, microphone, and
chairs were still in place. While customers browsed the store she set out books,
business cards, and flyers. Mia was prepared to perform. She had practiced her
poems over and over, and so she began.
“Good afternoon, everyone, I hope you are enjoying your day
of shopping. I am sorry I am a late reader, but I have a treat for you. I am
going to read from my collection of poems.”
As Mia’s voice flowed out into the room listeners shifted
toward it and took seats as close to her as they could manage so they could hear
every melodic syllable. Mia’s voice captivated everyone in the store and
because it was a warm day the doors were left open. Little rivulets of Mia’s musical
sound floated out the door where a crowd had gathered, and they too entered the
shop. Seats filled quickly.
When Mia finished reading the audience clapped loudly. People
stood. Comments flew, “Magical! Profound! Joyous!”
“Thank-you, thank-you!” Mia was delighted. It was not a common occurrence to have a
standing ovation at a poetry reading. Alex, the store manager, told her she was
welcome back any time and to bring more books. They were flying off the shelf.
Mia awoke to the loud ringing of the phone. “Mia, where are you! It’s me, Patsy! We are all here at Copperfield’s! Get down here! You are late!”
Amber, Patsy, Barb Moehring, Barb Toboni (Mia) |
12 comments:
This comment in an email from Jackie:
I really liked "Mia's Melody." It made me a little sad it was
only a dream but what a fun dream to have lived it!
Someday that dream will come so hang onto your hat!!!!!
Love, Jackie
This comment in an email from Donna:
I love the idea of poetry being an irresistible attraction
for the crowds, ambrosia for the masses. Why did she
have to be dreaming? good twist at the end (more realistic)
but I wanted the fairy tale.
It would be fun to include one of your poems in quotes.
Thanks Jackie: It could be true, my books flying off the shelves. I'll keep dreaming.
Thanks, Donna. I like your ideas. Perhaps for a rewrite I'll add a poem. I guess I woke up because I'm a realistic type of gal. Too bad!
This comment from Ellen:
Got me ! Great !....e
You're it! Ha! Thanks Ellen.
This build up is great fun! nice work barb. christina
Love this. Next time it won't be a dream, I hope. Patsy
Thanks, Christina. This was fun. I don't do fiction too often so it was a good exercise.
Thanks, Patsy. I hope you're right!
An email from Aunt Pat
I always enjoy reading your blogs, it keeps me in the family.
Love you, Auntie
Thanks, Auntie.
I always enjoy having you in the family!
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